You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Manish Kumar and I am writing

this

letter to apply for a job opening in your restaurant. I am a

22 year old

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22-year-old

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male, currently finishing my studies at ABC University in hotel management as my major.

Moreover

, I am in my final semester and currently working on my thesis project, which

leave

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leaves

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me with enough time on my hands to pursue a

full time

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full-time

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job. While I've been a

part time

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part-time

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waiter for

last

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2 years in a cafe, I think my experience can come quite handy as a restaurant waiter.

Additionally

, I can

also

handle other supporting chores,

such

as, cleaning the premises, and handling the cash, etc. I hope you find my profile a good fit for the job.

However

, If you may have any questions, or would like to set up a zoom call for the interview, I'm available on any day of the week from 9 o'clock in the morning to 6 o'clock in the evening. Looking forward to hearing back. Yours faithfully, Manish Kumar

Submitted by MK on Sun Aug 16 2020

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8 paragraphs

175 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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