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Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #it’s #group
Learning makes a
person
 civilized,
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
 and cultured.It is said by some individuals that its better to learn in a
group
 rather than by its own. In my perspective, when a
person
learn
Suggestion
learns
 in a
group
 he/ she understand things in a better way and my viewpoints on
this
 issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with, when a
person
 sits in a
group
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group, then he
then
 he / she can learn better because in a
group
person
 get a chance to share his thoughts and opinions with others and can interact in a better way.Another
advantaage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
advantages
 of
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
 in a
group
 is that when a
person
 learns in a
group
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group, then he
then
 he/ she can easily
removes
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remove
 his/ her hesitation and perform in a better way and he/ she can become
better
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a better person
better people
better persons
person
.
Furthermore
, when an individual
join
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joins
 a
group
 he can get a chance to exchange different opinions which might change his/ her mind and ideas
.
Accept space
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
its
it is
it's
 important to join a
group
 in order to learn something new and different
.
Accept space
.
 To recapitulate,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to write that both ways of learning have advantages as well as disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative problem-solving
  • exchange of ideas
  • peer support
  • social interaction
  • fosters
  • enrich
  • perspective
  • motivate
  • isolation
  • feedback
  • misconceptions
  • self-paced
  • retention
  • self-discipline
  • lifelong learning
  • customization
  • engagement
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