Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning makes a
person
civilized,
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
and cultured.It is said by some individuals that its better to learn in a
group
rather than by its own. In my perspective, when a
person
learn
Suggestion
learns
in a
group
he/ she understand things in a better way and my viewpoints on
this
issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
with, when a
person
sits in a
group
Suggestion
group, then he
then
he / she can learn better because in a
group
person
get a chance to share his thoughts and opinions with others and can interact in a better way.Another
advantaage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
advantages
of
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
in a
group
is that when a
person
learns in a
group
Suggestion
group, then he
then
he/ she can easily
removes
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remove
his/ her hesitation and perform in a better way and he/ she can become
better
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a better person
better people
better persons
person
.
Furthermore
, when an individual
join
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joins
a
group
he can get a chance to exchange different opinions which might change his/ her mind and ideas
.
Accept space
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
its
it is
it's
important to join a
group
in order to learn something new and different
.
Accept space
.
To recapitulate,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to write that both ways of learning have advantages as well as disadvantages.
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