In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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have taken
serious consideration about whether they should spend Suggestion
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money
constructing new railway lines for faster travel between cites
or improving existing public assign a location to
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transport
. This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why money
should be spent on improving present public transport
before constructing new railways.
On the one hand, building new railway lines would obviously bring certain benefits for
the citizens. Suggestion
to
Firstly
, it would help travelers
between cities save plenty of times by modern trains the act of going from one place to another
travelling
travels
contructed
. For those who have make by combining materials and parts
constructed
such
hutsle
and bustle life like students or employees, a fast kind of cause to move furtively and hurriedly
hustle
transport
would be their first
choice. Secondly
, having a new means of travel would also
help reduce traffic conjucntion
. excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
Moreover
, road transport
would somehow be released from the heavy load of passengers on a daily basis if raiway
lines are built and share the burden.
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railway
On the other hand
, in my opinion, it would be more effective to spend money
upgrading existing public transport
before new railways are constructed. As a matter of fact, any development and
innovation needs a strong foundation and in Accept comma addition
development, and
this
case it is the public roads which are important to be taken into account. In fact, the authority could firstly
invest money
on
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flood
. Suggestion
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This
is especially crucial to some tropical countries like Vietnam during raining season. In addition
, some
public transports like buses, one or some or every or all without specification
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taxi
should Suggestion
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the taxi
a taxi
also
need to improve service quality as well as open more routes in reasonable places and times to meet the need of travellers.
In conclusion, the benefits of having fast railway lines are undeniable. However
, it would be greater if the current public transport
is bettered before any upgrades is made.Submitted by Andy on
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