Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

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a great impact on

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learning methods.

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nowadays

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of pupils have used the

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required information,

libraries

have their own importance in providing resources. I partially agree with the above notion and my reasons for the inclination are articulated in the following paragraphs. To commence with, it is true that, the

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is a treasure of data and info in all

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fields and It

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having their own advantages.

Firstly

, any data on any subject can be attained in

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of

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round

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the clock;

while

libraries

are working

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only for a few hours

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a day.

Secondly

, it provides mobility, the material

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updated

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every second and one can get updated records in a minimal time.

Finally

, they provide comfort

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information without going to

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particular place and it is

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busy people.

For instance

, students can

also

acquire details of the ongoing research on a specific topic.

On the other hand

, the

libraries

have their own importance. First of all, in terms of the ambience.

Moreover

, the

libraries

have a quiet environment with

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distractions, which helps to study with full

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concentration.

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the examination

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, 30% of students

are preferring

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to study in college or school

libraries

.

Furthermore

, anybody can update the blog or material on the

internet

and

thus

there are no granted research papers available to find records of the experiments.

To conclude

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the

internet

is a great source of information with accessibility and mobility, the library has its own advantages

such

as ambience,

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environment and proof of correct data with the name of the author.