Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

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learning methods.

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nowadays

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of pupils have used the

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required information,

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have their own importance in providing resources. I partially agree with the above notion and my reasons for the inclination are articulated in the following paragraphs. To commence with, it is true that, the

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is a treasure of data and info in all

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fields and It

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having their own advantages.

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, any data on any subject can be attained in

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the clock;

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only for a few hours

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a day.

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, it provides mobility, the material

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updated

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every second and one can get updated records in a minimal time.

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, they provide comfort

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information without going to

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particular place and it is

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busy people.

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, students can

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acquire details of the ongoing research on a specific topic.

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, the

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have their own importance. First of all, in terms of the ambience.

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, the

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have a quiet environment with

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distractions, which helps to study with full

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concentration.

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the examination

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, 30% of students

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to study in college or school

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.

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, anybody can update the blog or material on the

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and

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there are no granted research papers available to find records of the experiments.

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the

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is a great source of information with accessibility and mobility, the library has its own advantages

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as ambience,

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environment and proof of correct data with the name of the author.