Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society, and other think young people should be free to behave as they will. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people think that it is better for the youngsters to come after their social oral heritage, the other

believe

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believes

it is their own choice to behave and follow whatever they want. From my own perspective, both of the given statement

have

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has

its own pro and cons that need to be discussed 

further

. On the one hand, due to the development of the society and

also

the globalization in the recent years, young people nowadays are able to access to a wide range of custom from diverse countries around the world.

Moreover

, their ways of thinking are much wiser and more dedicated;

therefore

, most of them can

distingush

mark as different

distinguish

and choose which are more ethical and right-minded to follow.

Also some

Accept comma addition

Also, some

traditions of old regime that

can not

can not

cannot

apply for the recent generation.

For example

, in the past, it was said that people considered

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

were only doctor, lawyer or police officer and those whose

profession

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professions

related to art, were often criticized and scorned badly.

However

,

this

viewpoint has changed due to the

youngster

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youngster's

success in various

field

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fields

such

as singer, dancer or businessman.

On the other hand

, it is better for children to go after the society tradition since some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world.

For example

, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. To sum up, I believe both of the

argument

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arguments

have its own pros and cons.

However

, from my point of view, sticking with the society tradition will be much more helpful for youngsters in their future life.