Are famous people treated unfairly By the media? Should They be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?

The topic of celebrities
is receiving
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has received
much attention from the public recently. It is my personal opinion that they are not fairly treated by the media and should be given more space for themselves.
This
essay aims at
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
the arguments to support my viewpoint. There are a number of reasons why famous people are considered to be unfair.
Firstly
, they tend to be the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of the public’s eye and treated more
superiorly
than normal people.
Consequently
,
this
trend causes a lot of frustration among citizens who believe that everyone should be equal.
Moreover
, as the popularity of celebrities grows, the media
focuses
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focus
too much on the coverage of them rather than important news. In details,
instead
of broadcasting about the effects of the
pandemic or
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pandemic, or
global warming, TV programmes show a lot of news and minor scandals surrounding famous people.
On the other hand
, I hold the view that more privacy should be given to celebrities. From the perspective of these people, fame is nothing to be proud of when they lose
ability
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the ability
to live normally. To be more specific, a famous person is always supervised by not only the
media but
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media, but
also
the annoying
paparazzo
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paparazzi
whose only aim is to take private photos of him or her.
Additionally
, celebrities are just human like everybody else and they deserve the rights to have their own privacy.
Therefore
, the media should only pay attention to their achievements, not personal life. In conclusion, celebrities are overvalued and people should not disturb them from enjoying a normal lifestyle.
Hence
, directors of the media should consider their condition to make
decision
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decisions
a decision
accordingly
.
Submitted by Andy on

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