Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people think that children should be taught to be
good person
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a good person
good people
in society by their parents.
However
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, from someone perspective’s people that these values should be taught at
school
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.
Personllay I
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Personally, I
Personally I
feel that
school
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and parents both are
play
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playing
played
equally important roles
on
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in
of
teaching children to become good citizens.
Firstly
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, it is important to remember that parents are the
first
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teacher and family is a place where children learn about many life lessons.
For example
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, they learn about the love,
leanr
gain knowledge or skills
learn
the way to share and help people who meet serious difficulties. Children are
also
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taught that they should take care of their relatives
such
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as grandparents, brothers and sisters and so on.
Besides
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, parents are the ones who provide children with motivation and inspiration so that they can become good people of society in the future.
On the other hand
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,
school
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is the place where children are conveyed skills on various subjects to be able to master life and contribute knowledge to society in the future.
In addition
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, children
then
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can become teachers,
doctors and
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doctors, and
so on, which are essential for the development of
any
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
countries. When children study at
school
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, they can expand the range of vision about many things, which their parents have not yet taught about
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this things
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these things
this thing
. In conclusion, children should be taught by parents as well as educated at
school
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. When they are educated about
compassio
a deep awareness of and sympathy for another's suffering
compassion
compulsion
, kindness and social
knowlede
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
, they
gain
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will gain
knowledge and skills to become good citizens of
country
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the country
countries
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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