Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

It is

been

the state or fact of existing

being

seen in our society that there are some people who prefer to eat only vegetarian or vegan food to stay healthy and

also

make the

world

a better place for other animals to live. But there are other people as well who does not think in a same way. In my point of view, I totally agree with the fact that every living creature has

contribution

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contributed

to make our

environment

healthy. To start with, people who

does not eat

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do not eat

meat

or fish believe that eating

meat

can harm their body as doctors suggest consuming red

meat

everyday can increase the chance to make diseases and sometimes cancer as well. For me, I

also

believe that consuming too much

meat

can harmful for our

body

Accept comma addition

body, for

for instance

, there was a news of a cancer patient who diagnosed cancer due to eating unhealthy food and lifestyle.

However

, in today's

world

, our

environment

is getting polluted day by day and some people are trying not to kill other animals and giving them

chance

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a chance

the chance

to contribute to make our

world

be a better place.

For instance

, people who do not eat

meat

, they in fact helping our

environment

to keep better as every creature has

role

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roles

a role

to make our social life and

environment

balanced and better. In conclusion, I think, we should give importance of our health and

also

to take care of every creature and

environment

to make a better

world

to live in.