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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

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It is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 seen in our society that there are some people who prefer to eat only vegetarian or vegan food to stay healthy and
also
 make the
world
 a better place for other animals to live. But there are other people as well who does not think in a same way. In my point of view, I totally agree with the fact that every living creature has
contribution
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contributed
 to make our
environment
 healthy. To start with, people who
does not eat
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do not eat
meat
 or fish believe that eating
meat
 can harm their body as doctors suggest consuming red
meat
 everyday can increase the chance to make diseases and sometimes cancer as well. For me, I
also
 believe that consuming too much
meat
 can harmful for our
body
Accept comma addition
body, for
for instance
, there was a news of a cancer patient who diagnosed cancer due to eating unhealthy food and lifestyle.
However
, in today's
world
, our
environment
 is getting polluted day by day and some people are trying not to kill other animals and giving them
chance
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a chance
the chance
 to contribute to make our
world
 be a better place.
For instance
, people who do not eat
meat
, they in fact helping our
environment
 to keep better as every creature has
role
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roles
a role
 to make our social life and
environment
 balanced and better. In conclusion, I think, we should give importance of our health and
also
 to take care of every creature and
environment
 to make a better
world
 to live in.
Submitted by Sumi Afroz on

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