You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train,you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter: • give the details of where and when you left the bag • describe the bag and its contents • suggest how you could get the bag back
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope
this
message finds you well. I am writing to notify you of an issue I encountered during my recent journey by train. Upon boarding, I realized I had inadvertently left my bag
on the platform at St Pancras International on the 28th of October at 4 p.m. The bag
was left on a bench near Platform 2.
The bag
is black with a red stripe and contains several important items, including personal documents, a laptop, and various personal effects. The documents comprise my ID card, a notebook, and some official papers. The laptop is a silver Dell model, easily identifiable by a sticker on its cover.
I would be grateful if you could check if the bag
has been found and advise me on how I can retrieve it. Your assistance in this
matter would be greatly appreciated. I am available to visit the station at a convenient time if necessary.
Thank you very much for your help.
Yours sincerely,
Anghelina
Correct your spelling
Angelina
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Continue to ensure all required points are covered thoroughly and clearly.
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Consider slightly enhancing transitions for even smoother coherence.
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All necessary details such as time, location, and description of the bag are given.
coherence cohesion
The letter structure is clear and concise, with a good use of paragraphs.
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The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a logical flow from problem introduction to solution suggestion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite