Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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In today’s society, it is true that

technology

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has a huge influence on communication of human. I believe that there are various ways that affect the interaction between people. I

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rely on that

technology

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has both positive and negative

impact

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impacts

on social life. There are a host of reasons to support the idea that cutting-edge

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has

big impact

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a big impact

on human

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relationships

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, the relation

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between

members family

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the member's family

member's family

members' family

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is more close-knit when they are living far from each other.

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, through Skype, parents could easily see and communicate with their children regardless of far distance.

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, it could build-up the interaction between teachers and students.

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, during the corona virus pandemic, it is impossible for students go to school, the Internet allows students to grasp knowledge from teacher at home.

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, I believe that

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top-notch equipments have both positive and negative effects on human life. It is beneficial for cooperation and international companies to unite together to gain the lucrative. To

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case, the local firms manufacture mask

need

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needs

to look for the American companies and other international ones to export the products in order to serve for citizens.

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the benefits of

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, it

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has bad

in impacts on people

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impacts on people

. Some people spend almost their time on using modern equipments.

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, many people are addicted by computer game and ignore works, studies and acquaintances around them. Thereby, their health and brain can be damaged by overusing. In summary,

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such

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an intelligent mean for people to connect with each other. I reckon that people could not deny benefits of

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bring to human.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do