Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Submitted by mittonguyen2001 on Wed, 08/12/2020 - 15:18 Many people believe that the reason for the tremendous revenue of consumer items is the power of advertising no to real needs. I totally disagree with

this

view and I will discuss two main reasons in following paragraphs.

Firstly

, customers are getting smarter so they

can not

cannot

be influenced by advertising. Specifically, they only decide to buy

daily product

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a daily product

when they have real demands or after they read

review

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reviews

and feedback of the product

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groups or in forum in Internet.

For example

, a study shows that 70% of customers in a local supermarket joined more than one online group

such

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during the night of the present day

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to read reviews, feedback or ask other members about the item before they decide to buy it. Another example is Shark Hung, who have supermarket chains in Vietnam, invested 1 billion VND in 2018 for advertising

campaign but

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campaign, but

online reviews

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are

adverse so the sales were still unchanged. It is clear that, companies should

invested

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invest

for product's quality rather than advertising. A multitude of people still

believe

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believes

advertising is manipulating consumers, they state that many teenagers buy items because they only want to advocate their celebrities.

However

, I believe

this

to be a very shortsighted view because before young people buy some goods, they will ponder their benefit.

For example

, 60% of Taylor Swift’s fans say that they not only buy her products because they admire

her but

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her, but

also

the items is definitely well-designed and sophisticated. It is obvious that the sales of items rely on their quality In conclusion, I do not believe that

the high

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higher

income of consumer goods

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thanks to the power of advertising. Not only because consumers

become wise but

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become wise, but

also

they study the good's benefit carefully before buy it

Submitted by Andy on Tue Aug 18 2020

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Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give ur opinion.

These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?