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Goverments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Goverments
Suggestion
Governments
 are giving huge aid to artists. Some people would argue that
art
 desire that amount of money, I believe that there is a lot of significant things need that support more than
art
. On one hand, museums and galleries that present
art
are
Suggestion
is
 dramatically important to obtain the culture of the country. With that beautiful
drawings
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drawing
 artists can preserve the
traditionals
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
traditions
 image for the future of
city
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the city
 as well as the society itself.
In addition
,
art
 can open a lot of opportunities to business man to invest in
art
 places in order to make as an entertainment facility which leads to huge success and have a lot of profits.
However
, I believe that government has to focus not only in
art
 but
also
on
Suggestion
in
people education
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a person's education
person's education
 and in public health.
On the other hand
, education plays a significant role in people life's as
consedered
carefully weighed
considered
 to be a door for employment. Universities need huge part of support in order to provide people a good manner of teaching.
In addition
, universities should build facilities that important to raise the level of educating like, library.
Furthermore
, researches that carried out by professionals and students need funding in
oreder
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to provide value and help the country to develop. In conclusion, I believe that education is more important because it will indicate to the prosperity and the development that the country have more than
art
.
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