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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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Since the establishment of schools, creative subjects have been implemented to the curricula in order to give young minds all-round growth. Many believe currently there is not much
time
 dedicated towards subjects
such
 as arts, music, drama and creative writing.
Although
 some may argue that creating more
time
 for these subjects can help children have a full
growth
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growth, however
however
, I disagree,
this
 is because it can result in negative development as it would require cutting more
time
 out of other subjects.
Firstly
, adding more
time
 for these subjects will require extending school hours and financial aid. Take the UK
for example
, 40 schools each year across Britain go on strike as the education department is underpaid. If there is an addition of extra hours to school-
time
, it will require higher pay for educators and resources which
currenlty
at this time or period; now
currently
 is not possible to fund due to UK in recession
.
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.
On the other hand
, it is understandable to give more
time
 to the artistic
subjects as
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subjects, as
 many may seek a future in these fields.
However
, though these subjects are important to give a child a different way of thinking, they are not as vital as foundation subjects
such
 as English language which comes in handy daily. In my opinion, adding more hours of
extracurriculum
Suggestion
extra curriculum
 activities will only result in loss of
time
 from foundation subjects, I believe
this
 is where parents can step in and hire private tutors for arts to aid their child's maturation. To conclude, even though artistic subjects are important for the development of
child
Suggestion
a child
children
the child
, they should not be cutting
time
 out of vital subjects
such
 as English and Maths which help us in
everday
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
.
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