«It is generally believed that an artistic talent is exceptional gift of few people. However there is an opinion that most people have hidden artistic talents».

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is considered by some there are
naturally
Suggestion
natural
artistic persons, who have been
possessing
Suggestion
possessed
their abilities since childhood.
Nevertheless
, there is a point of view that many people can reach some goals during
hard working process
Suggestion
the hard working process
, meet targets merely developing their hidden talents.
However
, while I believe that certain individuals have inborn faculty, I agree there are various types of people having diverse, own ways to reveal artistic skills.
Firstly
, it is believed that the definition of the word «talent» is really complicated to set. The fact is talent is something personal, what comes from
human personality
Suggestion
the human personality
.
Secondly
, determining artistic talents it is better to verify that there are different ways from where these talents come
.
Accept space
.
With regards to individuals who are exceptionally gifted from an early age, it is not easy to explain the cause of
this
phenomenon. Scientists strongly believe the reason could be found in genetic field. Some kinds of abilities are due to family roots and heredity. Intrinsically a matter of
genetic
Suggestion
genes
genetics
has been scientifically proven. But it does not mean that enhanced people are geniuses from the beginning, they just are more liable to an art practicing. The presence of suitable genes is not enough for having the aptitudes. There is another factor directly influencing the meeting of
individuals
Suggestion
individual
individual's
goals. The point is the/
our
introduces an alternative
or
surrounding has a big impact on developing talents.
Furthermore
the distinctive circumstances could simply affect the acceptability of releasing new artistic gifts.
Finally
/
editionallyin
in addition, by way of addition; furthermore
additionally
the most cases a tight and regular work could be the reason why people become more experienced. Many famous people,
such
as Goethe or Mozart,
were
we are
we're
convinced that just 5% of human skills
is
Suggestion
are
has been
just a talent, the rest part
are
Suggestion
is
individual desire and intention to work. In conclusion, there are different points of view about the artistic talents; each of them deserves a deep research.
Although
a few of people tend to be more gifted, there
is
Suggestion
are
the big
Suggestion
the biggest
percentage of talented people who show a creative
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
without certain exceptional gift.
Submitted by nkh_99 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: