Modern lifestyle means that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, the rapid increase in labour force participation has dramatically affected the childcare moment by parents. I completely disagree with

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view and will give my reasons below. On the one hand, less hour with children acts as an incentive for child development. One reason is that if parents spend quality and meaningful day playing with their kids

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, they are likely to value the present and do not take children for granted. In fact,

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not only benefits close relationships with children, but

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enhances the unconditional love of parents, especially fathers.

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, since children do not put up with strong leadership of parents, they have a tendency to be more independent and intrinsically creative, which will be conducive to either their social growth or work in the future.

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means that being less reliant on others when tackling small issues

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as homeworks or games ensures children not to be susceptible to big troubles in real activity.

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, reducing term for children contributes to a better quality of soul.

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, by determining to work long hours, parents are likely to earn more money at the expense of childcare stage, which provides children with good nutritions and health care. In fact, without working hard to earn a living, parents have to cut back on their spending on food to ensure stability in a rocky economic environment.

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, in order to afford expensive and luxury holidays for children, it requires extensive work hours for parents.

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, children feel happier when having a joyful

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with their parents rather than daily schedules at home. In conclusion, l believe that less

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intensive care of parents not only brings children good development, but

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improves the quality of their entire growth.