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increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

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It is scientifically believed that individuals are facing health obstacles due to having excessive fast food. So, some people opine that the government's intervention is imperative and it should impose higher price including tax. But I do not consider that price should be risen by imposing a higher tax. So, I disagree with
this
 statement. So, I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraphs that how individuals are getting fat as well as threat and how can we get rid out of
this
 issue.
First
 of all, in
this
 modern era, with the development of every field, cuisine industry
also
 has grown and brought multifarious varieties of cuisine, but fast food has become popular in
this
 world and people get used to of
this
 variety and face enormous health problems.
For instance
, various newspapers show us that if someone eats meal which is made by burger and bread,
then
 he gets fitness issues,
such
 as fat, pain in joint, and weak in body. These problems happen because of
this
 meal does not have nutrition, which insists us to be strong from inside and prevents us from diseases.
Second
 of all, as we all know it is burning issue these days that
this
 kind of meal has become harmful for us as we eat it in more quantity. So, people should change their cooking habits and follow some newspapers which provide us some tips on healthy diet.
Moreover
, the government should organize some events in every town to aware youth regarding disadvantage of unhealthy cuisine.
Also
, people should follow some television show, which advises us to preserve our health. Coming to an outcome, rising tax is not solution to reduce the number of infants who get fast food more rather than other healthy snacks. So, youngsters should be forced to aware about unhealthy foodstuff by television shows and newspapers add so that they could get knowledge about the side effect of hamburgers and breads.
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