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It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #aunts #uncles #child’s #upbringing #parents
Some people consider
children nurturing
Accept comma addition
children, nurturing
 not only by
patents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
patients
 but
also
 by other close relatives as us beneficial and some think that it should be avoided.
This
 essay will review
this
 question from both sides. In my opinion, it's required to involve grandparents in
this
 process while other relatives' impact may be harmful in some cases. With grandparents' care, wisdom, and calmness children will be protected and well taught. Same time other
more younger
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younger
 relatives can expose different examples of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 so in most cases, it should be limited to some reliable amount of communication time. Without
relatives' support
Suggestion
the relatives' support
 it's quite hard sometimes to keep life/work balance and
also
 spent the required time for children to give them all the care and support. So from my point of view, it's really great to involve other close relatives as grandparents
into
Suggestion
in
 the process of children's upbringing
although
 younger uncles/aunts could cause unexpected impact. From
this
 statement, I partly agree with the idea of whole family participating in upbringing children.
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