In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, countries are facing all together a new problem,
that is
, a student who completes their graduation are often unemployed even if they score well in their examinations. What factors would have led to
this
kind of situation? In the passage we would discuss about the reason for above mentioned statement. There are many factors which lead to
this
kind of situation, but in
this
passage we would be taking a look at common reasons,
such
as demand for
graduate
students is less in today's market because companies are becoming high tech and does not require human to be paid extra for the work which could be accomplished by a machine. As the technology is growing company does not require skilled labour as much as they used to require earlier. The
second
and the most important reason, would be the number of students that
graduate
every year which has increased drastically over the years when compared to previous years. Since, demand for the job, has not increased in a similar manner, which often leads to a higher number of
graduate
students in comparison to jobs available in the market.
This
is not, just the case companies have even raised their standards for selection, they often look for an experienced
graduate
student. In my view, the university should change their curriculum of education and involve internship with them as
this
would create high changes for a
graduate
student for getting an offer from a company
secondly
, they should even conduct mock interviews as
this
could help the students to understand what an interviewer is looking for.
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