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Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this? Does this affect parents or children more? Read my sample answer for this essay here.

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Parents
plays
Suggestion
play
 an important role in the life of children. It is said by some individuals that these days they have less time so there is
communication gap
Suggestion
a communication gap
 between two generations
.
Accept space
.
In my perspective, it affects both parents and children and my viewpoints on
this
 topic will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with, children feel lonely and sad when parents do not spend time with them and
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 they can indulge in pornography, stealing and snatching which is really dangerous for them.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
 when parents and children do not communicate with each other
then
 children do not share their personal problems with them which can become the cause of stress and other psychological disorder for them.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in many developed countries and its result was that these days because youngsters are suffering from anxiety and depression because of less communication between them.
On the other hand
, it has
also
 changed the lifestyle of
parents
Suggestion
the parents
.
Accept space
.
Parents
also
 live without their children which has really changed their lifestyle and they
also
 feel lonely and depressed
.
Accept space
.
 To recapitulate, I would like to write that parents and children both suffer because of less communication between them. They should interact more with each other in order to resolve their issues.
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