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People today get less sleep than in the past. What is the cause of this? What are the possible effects of this development?

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Sleep is essential for the well being of human beings. These days sleep
pattern
Suggestion
patterns
 of people has been changed due to their busy
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. There are various reasons behind
this
 and it has
also
 put some effects on the development and my viewpoints will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, one cause of the less sleep level of the people is that these days people’s working hours has been increased as compared to ancient
time so
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time, so
 they have less time to sleep because they utilize time to do their household shores. Another reason is that these days technology has introduced mobile phones, laptops,
ipads
Suggestion
iPads
iPod
ipads'
 so people prefer to use these
gadgests
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
 for entertainment purpose and
this
 has decreased their sleeping hours.
On the other hand
,
this
 change has adversely
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
 the lifestyle of the people and they are suffering from many health problems and mental disorders.Some of the people suffer from insomnia and they are taking many medicines from
this
.
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.
For instance
,
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,
 a survey was conducted in the year of 2018 in India and its result was that forty percent percent youth population of India is
sufferening
a state of acute pain
suffering
 from mental disorders and disturbed sleep pattern due to the reliance of them on mobile phones and laptops and computers. To recapitulate, I would like to write that people should focus on healthy sleep patterns because
its
it is
it's
 really essential for the proper functioning of their brain so they should take healthy sleep.
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