A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Puja, I am writing to let you know that I am very thankful to you, for accepting to take care of my dog and looking after my house, you can contact me through

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[email protected] or you can call me at 789347890. I will be on vacation for 3 days and returning on 3rd June. Let me provide you with more details, the pet has to be fed every 2 hours once in the morning and evening.Could you

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take it outside for once in the evening?

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, I have ordered a gadget from

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, that will be delivered can you please collect it.

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, if you need any help regarding cooking items I have written where it is placed on a paper and kept on the coffee table. Could you help with the laundry?It is open twice weekly on Thursday and Friday, you can find clothes in the collecting bin near the washing area. Appreciate your help. I am looking forward to

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you. Lots of love, Sushma

Submitted by sushma on Wed Aug 19 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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