"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

#work #company #friend #jobs #job #news

Dear friend, You know that I started working in a new company a few weeks ago . The reason I am writing you

this

letter is I introduce you to my new

job

Firstly

, I am beginning

this

letter with why I changed my latest

job

. Because my old

job

was very boring and holiday entitlement only in one day .

In addition

, I was not well paid . So I left that

job

Nevertheless

, my new

job

is very amazing . I am a translator at the British embassy. Everything is fine for me here . I earn enough money in

this

place .

Moreover

, I have a good team . I have some new information .

That is

, I am going to London for training .

Besides

, I will stay there for two years . After that , I will return to Uzbekistan. At that time, I am going to bring a gift for you . If you learn the English language, I will invite you to London. Yours sincerely, SARDOR UTKIROV Sardor O'tkirov

Submitted by asqar4997 on Fri Jan 06 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

180 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before write a letter to the accommodation officer. in your letter - give details of your course and arrival/ departure date - ⁠ explain your accommodation needs - ⁠ask for information about getting to from the college
I am writing this letter to inform you about my course in your college. As you know, I have never been travelling abroad.
7
band
Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples
It's certainly true that a big sector of the population prefers to work from their houses than work onsite. However, not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although, there are certainly some advantages.
6
band
Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and conclude.
Various circumstances exist that would compel parents to send their children to boarding school. Be that as it may, parents, psychologists, and policymakers often debate whether the nature of boarding schools presents positive or negative outcomes. This essay will explore arguments for both sides and provide detailed analysis to aid readers in arriving at their own conclusion.
4
band
Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about online courses. However, the advantages of this method in comparison with conventional learning are still controversial. I agree with the view that students can benefit more from state-of-the-art technology instead of traditional education for the following reasons.
7.5
band
There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Describe the complaints that have been made -Say why the reception area is important -Suggest how the reception area could be improved
I am writing this letter to impart my thoughts on the improvement of the welcome area in our organization.

"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and conclude.

Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?