The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland.

The diagram illustrates the erosion

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of bluffs.

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, the

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involves several phases that

initiates

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with soft areas of cliffs and

culminates

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in promontory destruction by sea waves and

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precise

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phenomenon entitled

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«erosion». The action commences when seawater, apparently at high tide, seeps

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into

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the

weakness

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spot of the rock,

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instance

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this

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site may be a cave, which gives a possibility for water inflow.

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process

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merely seemed to be

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, but intrinsically there are quite serious consequences for the rocky formations. Over

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time the cave that has been subjected to an erosion phenomenon is supposed to be a naturally created arch. The fact is there are plenty of those arches which have become worldwide known locations (

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as Durdle Door or Dorset) and are

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attraction

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for tourists.

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original act is not completed at the stage mentioned above.

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, when an arch has already

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a roof is exposed to a breakdown,

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would lead to

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of

rocky

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heap only.

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,

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pile is not available to contradict

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water waves and tides,

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result

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the ledge of

cape

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will be damaged and an outcrop will soon almost disappear, leaving just stumps and stacks in water. It is impressive that nature can destroy and at the same time create new startling views. By a comparison between the beginning of

erosion

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the erosion

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process

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and the

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stage of

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this phenomena

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scientists and geologists may make predictions, do forecasts and indeed prevent

from

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some accidents.