Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that a prosperous career is most attributed to higher

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, while some others argue that students should start a

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after

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. I agree that there are some benefits to working as soon as

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is finished, but I would argue that it is better to attend

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or

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. On the one hand, entering the

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a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

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market straight after

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can be beneficial for some reasons.

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, working can be an effective way of accumulating skills. After years of studying at

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, what students need to know afterward is how they could adequately respond to things befalling them, and the key to that problem is social skills,

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as communication, problem-solving, and adaptability skills, which could be acquired nowhere better than in a corporate setting.

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, when serving customers from different backgrounds at a restaurant,

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students as a newcomer may have to learn the way of bringing these buyers a sense of satisfaction through observation and practical work rather than from a textbook.

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, people opt for landing a

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straight after finishing

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can make earnings that allow them to cover their basic needs, and

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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can reduce the financial burden on their parents.

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to that, by working from an early stage, these people can save up a considerable amount of money for their prospective objectives.

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,

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students tend to be confused about their career paths; starting to work early,

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, may provide them with some gap time to experience and seriously consider their choice of profession.

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, I believe that

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or

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education

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is always the right choice for all

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students. The

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benefit is that higher

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will furnish students with the fundamentals, which could be applied to whatever industry they will choose after graduation. Due to the insufficiency in

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proper knowledge, they will be unable to sift through the sea of information and become

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at a certain point.

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, it would be impossible to pursue by oneself in specific professional regions whose

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be those who want to become doctors will not achieve that goal without relevant qualifications offered by a specialized

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. Another benefit is that

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at a

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or

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can ensure more graduates'

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prospects. In

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an increasingly cutthroat

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market, an applicant needs to make himself or herself outstanding, among others;

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, an excellent academic background from a prestigious

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and a solid grasp of knowledge can be a competitive advantage. In conclusion, starting a

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straight after

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can have some benefits, but I believe that attending

university

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or

college

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is the shortest way to a successful career.