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You read a newspaper article that captured your attention.Write a letter to your friend and recommended sending the article. When and where What the article was about Why he should read it

#newspaper #article #attention #friend
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well.It has been quite a long since we met.
However
, today I'm writing to recommend you an important article, which I read
last
 weekend. Actually, I was flicking through the pages of my daily newspaper 'The Tribune' on Sunday morning.Suddenly, I came across an article
which
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 grabbed my attention. Let me tell you.The article was about 'Time
Management'
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.Since these days we are having hectic work
schedule
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 and it has become an arduous task to balance work and family life.That's why I decided to read the whole content.It was really interesting and I found that extremely beneficial. As you know, you are
also
 not paying
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 amount of attention to your family due to
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the excessive
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 workload and your ambitious nature.
Although
 it is necessary,
family
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 should
also
 be taken care of.I suggest you
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go through that editorial as it describes techniques to tackle both easily. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sandeep
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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