Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that arts like painting and music fail to directly improve people’s quality of life and

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government should allocate cash on other things like infrastructure to promote people’s nature of life.

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essay, I will explain why I think that arts,

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as melody and painting is as essential for people as other public services. The advantages of spending cash on arts cannot be overlooked. The arts clearly make people’s lives better.

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with, the arts give us immense joy and relaxation. Consider listening to a beautiful song sitting on the sofa after a whole day’s work; it really relieves the tiredness and we feel rejuvenated. Paintings, photographs and other pictures, add colour to our lives and often inspire people to create works of art of their own. I am not only thinking of artistic works produced by renowned artists, but

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those produced by children for their parents to attach to refrigerators using magnets.

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, the arts like music and painting are part of our culture and give identity to the country. Arts

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people together. By appreciating art, individuals from different parts of the nation could feel connected and related.

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, arts like soul and painting can help us express our emotions. It is a basic human need to be able to express ourselves. Art is what differentiates us from animals. As humans, most of us need an outlet for our creative and emotional needs and the best way to express

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is through the arts like tune and painting. Many people feel that the government should spend salary only on certain things,

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as defence, health and education. Whilst I agree that these things are important, I think that governments should be able to find a little money to spend on the arts, not only because they raise our nature of life, but because they can remind us of our heritage and show the world what kind of a country and people we are. To sum up, our government is responsible for improving the nature of people’s lives, both physically and spiritually,

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the proper amount of wage should be allocated wisely to the arts. Only by

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we progress our society in a more balanced and more sustainable way.