With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the world today, the increase in the demand of housing and transportation system at an alarming rate has become the main concern of society. Due to

such

serious issue

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a serious issue

, many policy makers

has considered

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have considered

a new strategy in which enterprises are encouraged to move out of metropolitan areas. While there are several disadvantages associated with

such

policy, I would argue that the benefits are more significant. On the one hand, the

relocation

of companies between urban and rural areas may come along with a few drawbacks.

First

of all,

enterprise

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an enterprise

the enterprise

enterprises

may face difficulty in seeking for

skilled workforce

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a skilled workforce

in case they locate outside the city

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

.

This

is because the new locations of work may require them to change the places of

living of not only

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living not only

themselves but

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themselves, but

also

their families

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in

rural areas where the living and educational standards are far more under that of

metropolis

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the metropolis

. Apart from that, as the wave of urban- rural

relocation

happens, the on city transport network would be placed under pressure. One explanation for

this

is that moving the business out of the cities require people to go a long distance to work and the number urban- rural of commuters would skyrocket.

On the other hand

, I am of the opinion that

such

policy possesses a lot of advantages which are

outweigh

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outweighed

these aforementioned drawbacks. The

first

obvious benefit is that the trend of

relocation

enterprises would create more job opportunities for local people.

As a result

, the number of employees

migrate

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migrates

to downtown areas to seek for jobs can be reduced significantly. Another substantial benefit is that the change in the locations of business may contribute considerably to the economic growth of rural

areas

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areas, thus

thus

closing the gap between these areas with urban areas. Because of

such

growth, rural employees may not have to find accommodation or commute to the big cities to improve their lives, in other word, the problematic social issue of housing and transportation in urban areas can be addressed to some extent. In conclusion,

although

there are a few drawbacks arising from the

relocation

of business between urban and rural areas, I would believe that the advantages that

such

policies bring to life are more

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