Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Noise, in general, can be considered as pleasant or irritable depending on peoples emotion and age. As the increase in the development of technology and

modern world

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the modern world

, the considerable level of

sound

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were needed

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was needed

for certain places. In

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essay, we are going to discuss both views about why some think it has to be controlled and why others think they should be allowed to make as much noise as they want.

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, we are going to provide our opinion after all considerations.

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, for adults they have much work to do and

fot

appropriate to; intended for

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that they need concentration.

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, old people and children were intolerable to high level clamourings.

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: Adults who are working and researching needs their concentration to not be disrupted by clamours, as it will damage their quality of works.

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, high

decibals

a logarithmic unit of sound intensity; 10 times the logarithm of the ratio of the sound intensity to some reference intensity

decibels

will affect the brains of kids and elders, a

reasearch

a scientist who devotes himself to doing research

researcher

suggested from medical science. From

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, we can refer that the volume control should be made in effect.

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So

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is why some people consider controlling of uproars.

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,

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, we need high

sound

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during concerts, while watching movies and other entertainments.

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: If a concert does not have enough speakers to reproduce the music made,

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it does not live up the show.

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, in

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatres

enough

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should be provided to make it entertaining.

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point of view makes humans to say that there should be control in noises. To summarize, there are places which

needs

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need

more

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sound but

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sound, but

that should not be taken as granted and create sounds in unnecessary places. In my

opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

, it should not be controlled during entertainment

shows but

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shows, but

it should definitely be controlled at all other places for public safety.