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I am writing
this
letter of introduction as part of my application to MLPIMG
program
. I am passionate about family
physician
as it fits my interests, experiences and personality well. Your
program
appeals to me particularly due to the need to work in rural areas and the one-year training that will make me more familiar with the expectations of the health care system in Manitoba. I was interested in
medicine
from my childhood and being a doctor in Iran has a very difficult pathway since students have to compete in an
exam
called Concur and only the top 0.1 % of them can study
medicine
. I got a really good score on that
exam
and entered the best university in my country to study
medicine
. Studying
medicine
in Iran means a 7-year study that will end up to be a general practitioner. After graduation from medical school, I did my
return
of
service
which was about 2 years. During
this
period, I worked as an independent family
physician
in a health
service
centre and I get a really good experience in my career. After finishing my
return
of
service
I decided to participate in residency
exam which
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exam, which
the content is similar to mccqe1 and according to the score and interest candidates choose their Specialty. I did my residency in obstetrics and gynaecology for 4 years in Shariati hospital, which is a big referral hospital and after doing the board
exam
I became a specialist. Specialities in Iran are a little different from here in Canada. I think because of the urgent need too some services like the need of counselling about contraception, doing NVD and C- section, performing screening tests in women and so on, the educating system has been changed and Ob &Gyn training in there is somehow like a family
physician
with subspecialty in Ob&Gyn in Canada and I was expected to be a family
physician
. I did my
return
of
service
for the Specialty training in a small town called LORDEGAN and
I
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me
was a real family doctor there and I am completely familiar with the duties and roles of a family
physician
in a rural setting. As a family
physician I
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physician, I
had the privilege of getting to know patients of all ages, over a long period of time, not only in terms of their whole body, but as part of their personal history, family, community, and society. After finishing my
return
of
service
I established my own private clinic in Tehran and accepted patients of all ages as a family doctor, meanwhile I worked in a small city near Tehran as a family
physician
. I
also
had some privileges with hospitals and about 4 to 5 nights per month I worked there as the
physician
in triage or emergency room depending on the hospital
program
. I have the skills to practice full-
service
family
medicine which
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medicine, which
includes, inpatient management, emergency
medicine
, care of the elderly, baby visits, minor procedures, obstetrics, and addiction
medicine
and working in different settings have taught me how to collaborate with various disciplines, colleagues, administrators and clients. In terms of personality my patients believe that I am very kind and when they see me they feel calm and
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is because of being open to listen patients and colleagues which is one of the most important qualities of a
physician
.My colleagues always find me available for consulting or changing shifts and the supervisors always find me hard working and ready for cooperation. The aspects of holism and the continuity of care involved in Family
Medicine
, as well as the fit with my experiences and personality, are what leading me to a passion for general practice and my education and prior work experience have well equipped me to meet the demands of the MLPIMG
program
. I am confident that studying and working as family
medicine
here in Manitoba will help me to fulfil my career and life aspirations. Thank you for your consideration
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