People think that a hundred years ago, the human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do think we still need to make progress?

It is true that there was a numerical
developments
Suggestion
development
nowadays due to the advancement of
technology
.
However
, except some areas which have an extensive progress, there are other fields that human should focus on. On the one hand, there is no argument against the fact that
technology
has the most significant achievements and inventions in recent decades since it has a huge impact every single area. Accompany with the support
from
Suggestion
of
latest
technology
,
people
Suggestion
peoples
’ living standards,
life
expectancy and other aspects have increased significantly.
For example
, individuals can integrate
technology
into
medical field
Suggestion
the medical field
to do surgery with the probability of positive result are much higher than a hundred years ago.
This
have saved
Suggestion
has saved
saves
is saving
life
of many victims who have to suffer with
deadly disease
Suggestion
a deadly disease
the deadly disease
deadly diseases
.
In addition
, compared to those who lived in the time where farmers have to harvest manually, people nowadays with the support from autonomous machines can increase their
productivities
Suggestion
productivity
dramatically.
On the other hand
, there
is
Suggestion
are
some main fields people nowadays have neglect
such
as the environmental issue and the poverty. Environment and natural resources should be preserved from the pollution and depleting ozone layers.
This
can be resulted from the usage of resources
excessively which
Accept comma addition
excessively, which
can seriously pose a threat to human
life
.
Furthermore
, the more improvement
technology
is, the more gap between the rich and the poor.
This
can be result from many factors,
for instance
, people who have a large amount of money are able to improve their quality of
life
while the poor have no opportunity.
As a result
,
this
could affect their
children
Suggestion
child
child's
children's
development later since their parents are unable to guarantee the basic needs for their children, which
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
increase in the prize. In conclusion, people should continuously develop some areas that are succeeding in development and focus on fields that are paid less attention.
Submitted by Andy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: