People think that a hundred years ago, the human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do think we still need to make progress?
It is true that there was a numerical
developments
nowadays due to the advancement of Suggestion
development
technology
. However
, except some areas which have an extensive progress, there are other fields that human should focus on.
On the one hand, there is no argument against the fact that technology
has the most significant achievements and inventions in recent decades since it has a huge impact every single area. Accompany with the support from
latest Suggestion
of
technology
, people
’ living standards, Suggestion
peoples
life
expectancy and other aspects have increased significantly. For example
, individuals can integrate technology
into medical field
to do surgery with the probability of positive result are much higher than a hundred years ago. Suggestion
the medical field
This
have saved
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has saved
saves
is saving
life
of many victims who have to suffer with deadly disease
. Suggestion
a deadly disease
the deadly disease
deadly diseases
In addition
, compared to those who lived in the time where farmers have to harvest manually, people nowadays with the support from autonomous machines can increase their productivities
dramatically.
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productivity
On the other hand
, there is
some main fields people nowadays have neglect Suggestion
are
such
as the environmental issue and the poverty. Environment and natural resources should be preserved from the pollution and depleting ozone layers. This
can be resulted from the usage of resources excessively which
can seriously pose a threat to human Accept comma addition
excessively, which
life
. Furthermore
, the more improvement technology
is, the more gap between the rich and the poor. This
can be result from many factors, for instance
, people who have a large amount of money are able to improve their quality of life
while the poor have no opportunity. As a result
, this
could affect their children
development later since their parents are unable to guarantee the basic needs for their children, which Suggestion
child
child's
children's
continuously
increase in the prize.
In conclusion, people should continuously develop some areas that are succeeding in development and focus on fields that are paid less attention.seemingly without interruption
continually
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