Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

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It is becoming an increasingly prevalent trend for students, especially in western countries
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as the US and Britain to take a
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year
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. Some claim that taking a
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off would be beneficial while others regard it as a waste of
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. I would argue that taking a
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year
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would be wasteful because students do not take
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time
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seriously and the
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off rarely leads to fruitful employment that advances students’ careers. The majority of students would not devote the
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year
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for fruitful or rewarding activities.
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, one of my friends spent his
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year
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doing nothing, but hanging out with friends, playing video games, and watching YouTube. At the age of 18, people are not mature or sensible enough to have effective
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-management and to create a comprehensive plan for their lifelong
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.
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, the students would find the
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year
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is highly likely to be easy and fun,
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of conducive for their
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planning or personal enhancement. In a word, the
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year which
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year, which
should have been filled with internships and volunteer work turns out to be occupied with useless activities. At a
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glance, a
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year
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seems to have certain validity as it could provide farsighted and mature students with a meaningful experience, fostering their workplace interpersonal skills.
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, every decent job requires at least a bachelor’s degree, whereas the jobs that tend to be available for high school graduates are not helpful to a student’s
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progress.
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, many of my friends who took a
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off before starting university worked at Starbucks, KFC, or McDonald's. Unlike other higher-level occupations,
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jobs do not enhance professionalism or make use of theoretical knowledge. In fact, every decent job requires a bachelor’s degree.
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, spending a
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on less technical jobs does not appear to have any favourable professional outcome and
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delays one’s
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progress. To conclude, even for those rational and industrious students, a
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year
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can be futile and counterproductive. What a
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year
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could provide students is either instant relaxation or a dispensable work experience with a meagre salary.
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, I would argue taking a
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year
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at
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a golden age is a waste of
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.
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