Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones, and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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In the world of 21st century,
overpopulation
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, mainly in urban areas has caused tremendous problems, due to
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people are facing huge difficulties like it could be anything and
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difficulties
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difficulty
has caused serious problems. One should
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suggest
various ways to
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deal
with
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kind of problems
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for
various public authorities and individuals of that
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area
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,
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with the term "
Overpopulation
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" it means
large bunch
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a large bunch
of people living in
small area
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a small area
small areas
called as
overpopulation
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. We can says that crowdedness is one of the worst problems of urban area (highly developed cities) and
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developed area's are facing various challanges like
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:- Due to
overpopulation
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people are facing many poverty challanges,
overpopulation
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has cause problem related pollution means large number of people are using their own transportation and these has raised serious issues.
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,
Overpopulation
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in large developed areas has already
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caused
various problems and one should always take
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readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiatives
to solve
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this kinds
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this kind
these kinds
of problems. Problems like poverty faced by poor people is a serious issue and government can solve
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this problems
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this problem
these problems
by introducing various scheme or poverty package and help them
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Another
situation is, due to pollution problems one should understand
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problem and
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of using their own vehicle they should use public transport and government should take
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rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
stricter
action on
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.
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, to concl
ude crouded
a wild or unrefined state
crudeness
ness has raised various problems and government should understand
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problem and should t
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the initiative
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problems
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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