You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue with the part-time project management course which operates every evening. I have been attending your evening classes and I have really immersed myself in them. Because I started on my plan application form, I have been working as a mechanical engineer for a multi-national corporation that specializes in the design and construction area. Until now, I tried to arrange the project management program with the aim of fitting

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my tight schedule.

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, since there is an item in my labour contract that obligates

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to other branches of the company and I have been recently appointed the construction manager that requires me to travel to Laos in which I will control a building project of skyscrapers. I will probably our of the country for several months. Based on the information about the system that you are running, from the internet, I am aware that there will be the same program opening in the

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year.

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of trying to catch up when I returned from Laos, I was wondering if it would be possible for me to partake in the

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course in January of the

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year. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely, Harry Nguyen

huyhung.vstechFri Aug 21 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

The Greeting

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Living alone is better than living with someone. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel a country can't be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays many scientists and tourists would like to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?