Nowadays, people are spending more time away form their homes, because they spend longer in their work place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
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One of the major benefits of spending, higher working hours in the office is, the amount of task completed by the person will be on the higher side. Linking Words
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will help him earn more money, by which he will be able to fulfil his and his family goals and wishes with that extra money earned. Linking Words
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, in my job, if I give effort for more than eight hours, I will get 20% extra wage for every hour of task, which is really beneficial for my living, as I am able to spend quality vacation with my family every year. Linking Words
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, performance can be done more efficiently as the environment is more supportive in the organization. Linking Words
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