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Some people think that schools are merely turning children into good citizens and workers, rather than benefiting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely argued that the school's role has become more focused on making children good citizen
instead
 of turning them into better individuals. I partially agree with
this
 statement and I will discuss why in
this
 essay.
First
 of all, nowadays schools have been more concentrated on scientific curriculums and most of classes are more
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
 on how the children get the information without any consideration to the morals and ethics that actually make them a really good person.
Nevertheless
, parents have a great
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
also
 in the regard of making children a better human being.
For example
, if the children are living in a toxic family or non caring parents.
Then
,
Accept space
,
 the society doesn't expect from him to be a good individual because he would be full of complications. In conclusion, the liability to make children a better individual are on both the school and parents. So they have to share
this
 huge mission to improve our society.
Submitted by Amr Elkady on

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