Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Today, people
are tend
to do freelance jobs than Suggestion
are tending
work
for a company. In this
essay, I will discuss the reasons and give drawbacks of that tendency.
Self-employed is overwhelming office-employed. Firstly
, freelancers are not controlled by boss
and Suggestion
a boss
the boss
this
fits people who can not
can not
cannot
work
under pressure. For example
, a research proved that people are likely to work
more efficiently without any blame, criticism or command. Secondly
, when you work
as freelancer
, if you arrange time wisely, you can do extra jobs to make more money. Suggestion
a freelancer
This
case do not
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does not work
work
with people who work
at company since they have to work
scheduly
. plan for an activity or event
schedule
Additionally
, freelancers have more opportunities to try various occupations. For instance
, some officers may have artistic talents but
they Accept comma addition
talents, but
can not
quit the job to do whatever they want to. can not
cannot
This
contrasts to freelancers, they can do mixed job
since they are able to control their time and no one is in charge of them.
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a mixed job
Nevertheless
, self-employed has some negative sides. First
of all, as we know that competitive
is needed for progressive. Meanwhile, self-employed people are not as competitive as those who Suggestion
competition
work
for companies while their work
environment are not too crowded, otherwise
, they are generally not particular
excellent at one area but in various. Suggestion
particularly
Secondly
, freelancers suffer an impermanent income. They are likely to do extra occupations, this
means they can earn more, however
, it can be risky if they are not able to find any job.
In conclusion, after weighing the pros and cons of self-employed occupations, I would say that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.Submitted by Andy on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...