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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What are the advantages and disvanatges of doing part-time jobs?

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There is no doubt that the community works well in an environment where there are strict rules and regulations imposed on them. I strongly agree that if the people were given a free will without any limitations,
then
 there would be a lot of issues faced by the law-abiding individuals of the society.
Firstly
, the law formed by the government to be followed by the citizens is to reduce the crime rate in the country. These illegal activities increased due to no strict punishment
on
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of
for
 the crimes they indulged in, which leads them not to fear to continue the same.
For instance
, the cases on behaving unethically on women are rising day by day in office due to the no proper code of conduct followed by these organizations. These laws imposed among the people
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then
 there would be
fear
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fearful
fearless
 in engaging in [dr5] these criminal activities and
thus
 affecting the community.
On the other hand
, the act of giving more freedom to do anything they like to do will make human
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dr7] being to cross their boundaries without knowing the impact on the result of their action.
For instance
, if speed limit and installation of the camera on signals [dr8 in the roads
then
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 people tends to drive rashly without any concern on pedestrians and
this
 leads to
more number
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number
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Moreover
, underdeveloped countries, which has a flexible judiciary system [dr10] to quickly get rid of their illegal
activites
any specific behavior
activities
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dr11], which makes them continue their activities without guilty
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dr12]. In conclusion, the increase in the number of individuals turning
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 criminals. And
this
 creates threats to innocent peoples’ lives. So the jury and their punishment should be competent for the community to function correctly without any impediment.
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  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Money management
  • Time management
  • Social skills
  • Academic performance
  • Stress and fatigue
  • Leisure activities
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Negative work environments
  • Part-time job
  • Enhance a resume
  • Valuable life lessons
  • Financial burden
  • Juggle responsibilities
  • Interpersonal interaction
  • Unscrupulous work practices
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