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Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by book reading. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many parents insist that the access to electronic media for children should be restricted and they should be encouraged to read books in their free
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. I completely agree with
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 proposition and in
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 essay, I will explain the demerits of spending an excessive amount of
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 on electronic gadgets and the merits of
book
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 reading. To start with, when children spend an excessive amount of
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 watching television or playing computer games, it has a negative impact on their health and psychology.
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 and foremost, it weakens the
eye-sight
normal use of the faculty of vision
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 of children. The reason is the blue rays which come out of all the electronic devices and if kids watch
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 devices for a very long
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, it will affect their
eye-sight
normal use of the faculty of vision
eyesight
.
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, some cartoon shows on TV and video games make children more aggressive and ill-mannered.
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, playing games on Xbox that involve fighting can influence children to be violent in real life.
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, some cartoon shows can teach them improper
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.
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, parents must limit the kids’ screen
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 of engaging children on electronic devices, elders should persuade them to read books as it has numerous benefits.
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, the
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 reading habit would improve
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 skills. When someone starts reading, he or she will come across vast vocabulary and get to learn proper grammar.
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 way the command over
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 strengthens. Simultaneously, the knowledge of different subjects increases when the child reads more. More significantly, reading books will enhance the imaginative capabilities of a child. The reason behind
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 is that in books, the situations of the story are described in words and to understand that a reader has to imagine the background and
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 mental exercise improves their creativity. In conclusion, the advice to cut down children’s screen
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 and replace it by
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 reading
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 is reasonable because too much access to electronic media will harm children’s eyesight as well as inculcate bad habits in them.
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, motivating them towards
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 reading will not only improve their knowledge and
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language but
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language, but
 will
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 develop their
imagination
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imaginative
 power.

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