Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others however believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own.

Education make us civilized, cultured and polished. It is said by some individuals that people should not allow their children to take co – education a because of various

reasons while

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reasons, while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that both sexes learn more effectively when they

study

in mixed schools and these viewpoints will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with

,

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,

some of the parents do not send their children to co-educational institute because they think that girls are

more safe

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safer

when they

study

separately and they can

study

more freely.

For instance

, in some parts of the Punjab it was tradition that girls were not allowed to talk with boys so parents did not allow their daughters to have education those days because there were limited single sex related schools.

On the other hand

, some people have contradictory viewpoints they think that both sexes should be allowed to

study

in same school because it will give them chance to remove their hesitation and they will interact more with each other and

this

can help them in later stage of their life in which there could be the possibility that they would talk more confidently in future with their colleagues .Another benefit of putting children in same schools is that it will break the rigidness of traditions and bring equality in some countries. To recapitulate, I would like to write that

its

it is

it's

better to educate both children in

same schools

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the same schools

for their growth and development.