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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

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Stress
 is
serious issue
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a serious issue
the serious issue
 of concern in
this
 modernized and westernized world. These days people face emotional and mental
stress
 and there are various reasons behind it. It can be tackled and there are different methods to reduce it and it should be tackled efficiently and my viewpoints on
this
 issue will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, these days people
live
Suggestion
are living
 in nuclear families and they have
huge responsibility
Suggestion
a huge responsibility
the huge responsibility
 of their family and they have limited
time
 to fulfil their tasks which has put pressure on their mind and it has increased their level of
stress
.
Accept space
.
Another reason is that these days living expenses of people have risen because of the technological advancement and their working hours are increased so they have less
time
 for their entertainment which has definitely increased their
stress
 level.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions to eradicate
this
 problem.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
 people should get some free
time
 for themselves and they should join yoga classes in order to relax their mind and during weekends they should spend their
time
 with family members and they should
also
 discuss their problems with family members rather than dissolving
stress
 which could have serious health results for them
.
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.
Another solution is that people should learn to say no to others because it is the major cause of
stress
.
Accept space
.
 To recapitulate
,
Accept space
,
 I would like to write that
stress
 can be tackled if people are aware about its exact reason
otherwise
 it would become dangerous for people.
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