Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries were becoming more and more similar by the same products which bought anywhere in the world. In my opinion,
this
development
comprisesvboth
position and negation People are able to buy similar products anywhere promotes the exchange of commodities across countries,
therefore
, the economies of nations grow rapidly. Because
dometic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
goods have chance to export to the world as well as other goods sold in the
dometic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
market.
For example
, Vietnam’s GDP has increased three times compared to the period during Vienam’s economic embargo.
Furthermore
, the other positive
development
is that residents contracted
witth
expresses the means used
with
good commodities more convenient because of they can be sold everywhere
instead
of the country it was made in.
On the other hand
, America’s goods have sold in many China’s
showroom
Suggestion
showrooms
and show us China is the largest consumer market that all countries target.
Besides
, it is
existence
Suggestion
the existence
of negative
development
and one of these negation is everyone tending to prefer foreign products. The main reason is that they believe that foreign goods are better than
dometic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
ones, which lead to the
dometic
suitable to or characteristic of drama
dramatic
domestic
products are less developed.
As a result
,
this
economic country is dependent,
such
as Vietnam.
In addition
, if countries sell the same products, it will be lose its traditional characteristic goods. Because they are regularly unpopular.
For instance
, a number of streets in Hanoi’s Old Quarter have lost their traditional products as well as culture. In conclusion, any
development
activity has good and bad sides.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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