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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It is hardly surprising,
therefore
, that cultural events play an important role in
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 individual's life and in order to attend those events people expend a huge amount of money on tickets.
This
 essay completely agree with that statement. I truly feel that new friendships could be gained from
such
 events along with getting more relaxed after a hard day. Nowadays, significant new contacts are being made online,
however
, a lot of people prefer visiting a real life events where they can meet new acquaintances. Recent research suggests that common interests as well as hobby connects people.
Subsequently it
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Subsequently, it
 produces strong relations between people,
furthermore it
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furthermore, it
 is what has happened to me. Once upon a time I had bought
ticket
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tickets
 to a Ukrainian music festival where I met my girlfriend and we are together since that. In additional to
this
, visiting events helps to avoid routine work days. Despite on world crisis because of COVID19 virus, we are living in stressful conditions which could lead to nervous breakdown.
That is
 why it is essential to keep yourself healthy. One of excellent approach is attending events as any issues and disadvantage is being forgotten during the event. I have been a software developer for over six years and I learned one simple rule. If I spend a whole week in front of a computer, I must visit some cultural events which makes me relaxed on weekends. In conclusion, from my point of view spending money on sports events together with festivals has a positive impact for personal evaluation of life quality, beside that they helps to get new friendship which increase mood and people feel themselves valuable.
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