Today, TV channels provide man’s sport show more than women’s sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

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Nowadays, sports play a vital role in the entertainment industry and they

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encourage several people of different age groups to stay fit.

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, even with

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a great audience response most of the television sports channels prefers broadcasting men's sports over women's sports.

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, women's sports is now gaining interest in some viewers, but still it does not have the amount of support required to reach mass audiences.

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to that woman sport are

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evolving and adopting new sports which were earlier known to be played only by men.

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, many sports like Cricket and Football were not played by women about a decade ago, but with trend of women empowerment we are now having tournaments especially for women.

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, there are still several people who do not even know the women's sports involves sports other than badminton and tennis.

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lack of knowledge is

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responsible for the less fan following of women's sports which

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leads to the considerably less screen time of women's sports shows than men's sports shows.

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think same screen time should be given by every sports channel to women's and men's sports and

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a goal could only be achieved by the support of the fans.

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, the research proves that there has been a massive uplift in the viewer ship of women's sport shows after various kinds of advertisements pushed by the women national sports committee. To sum up, I believe that all the various television sports channel shows give respect and equal show time to both men's and women's sports.

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Today, TV channels provide man’s sport show more than women’s sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

Your opinion

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