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In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

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It is a well-known fact that school students are less likely to study the course of
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 in some governments for the time being. Several factors have driven
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 trend, which is not without problems, as will be now explained. There are two primary reasons why appearing the lack of appeal of
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 subjects.
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, many schools and universities are behind the times and have been slow to dismiss traditional ideas that girls should not study
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.
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 sexist attitude regards the study of
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 as a conventional male preserve, resulting in the devoid of
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-based students.
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, subjects like business or management are ever-attracting. There have spanned a flawed conscious about only these lessons could offer more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries,
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 improving the quality of life for those who take them. Owning to lacking of
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 experts, there are two concrete adverse implications
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 society. The logic behind
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 is that one result will be a lack of well-trained professionals to find solution to urge problems,
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 as the need to conduct research into alternative energy sources and to help society as a whole to achieve sustainable development.
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, more scientists will be necessary to lead the fight against climate change and to meet the enormous challenge of global warming. In terms of heath, another outcome could be a qualified researcher deficiency to search for a cure for life-threatening conditions,
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 as the increase in degenerative illness, namely Alzheimer’s disease, as an aging population. In conclusion, a host of root causes behind scientist reduction can be identified.
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 development has resulted in various issues, two of which include environmental and health ones.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics)
  • intrinsic complexity
  • interdisciplinary
  • career counseling
  • hands-on experience
  • financial constraints
  • cultural stereotypes
  • technological stagnation
  • economic growth
  • foreign experts
  • healthcare advancements
  • educational gap
  • perceived difficulty
  • reliance
  • environmental challenges
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