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Some people think that international news is important than the local news. Others argue that local news is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays the emphasis and influence provided by the news are alarmingly on the surge. Whereas some are the opinion that international news is necessary rather than the local news and some others opposite it. In
this
 essay delineates the
both
 views and give my opinion that genuinely news requires more value than the provider. To embark on the international news is enough to get awareness about the general issues around the world, but not in the case of regional issues. The international news is just focusing on the major problems in the world and
also
 they unable to provide the keen observation about the background of the local news and
also
 the international news are not supported by regional people because it impart only the main language of the country which is incapable for the local news listeners.
For instance
 the BBC news one of the popular international news channel would only be shown in the main language of a country. So the people who are only interested in the international affairs and have a good capability in the major language, the international news is enough.
On the other hand
, when considering the prominence of the local news, which is only given attention to the regional affairs.
However they
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However, they
 have the capacity to provide the depth of a news in a particular province. Even if they give less importance to the international affairs because majorly they were interested in the particular regions,
for example
, recently an air crash news in Kerala was
first
 published on the local news channels which have an international attention. In my point of view, the one who provides a genuine news coverage at a proper time is more important.
Therefore
,
both
 the international and local news have their own limitations to publish accurate and based on an issue. So that
both
 should have in our list
for example
, if we want to know the international
this
 it is necessary to check on the way, but for the external vice we should check in that way too. Conclusively
both
 news have their own benefits and limitations, so it is difficult to combine them so just we look at into the genuinely at a proper time.
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