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Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Whatare the causes and give your solutions?

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In the past years, young individuals were more polite and kind as compared with the present.I believed that the cause is related to family relationship and the kind environment where the young people grown up.
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, due to a family relationship, it will matter how young people will behave, it will contribute to every member of the family.When young people are raised by their parents who are well behaved and a God fearing, it will be a great impact
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 it will be inherited by the children.
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however now
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 a days some parents have less time with the family because they are working
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 it will result that they can no longer give proper and right guidance.
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 character will be applied by the children.
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the young people who live in an environment
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 not good like the neighbourhood are fighting
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 is one of the causes that will be inherited by young people to become less polite and
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, in my opinion the solution for
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 situation is that young people need to be taught the values of being polite and respectful to one another. To conclude
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Young individuals these days tend to be less polite and respectful because of the nature how they raised by the parents or the people who took care of them and
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 the surroundings that they have grown than in the past.
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