There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than larger family.what are the advantage and disadvantage
Nowadays, small
family's
units are increasing rather Suggestion
family
then
the larger family all over the world. In conjunction used in comparatives
than
this
essay, I will consider both sides of the benefit and drawback.
In the wake of humans living place are becoming small
, many independent Suggestion
smaller
teenages
move out to a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
rent
a house. This
makes many small family units. The advantage is people no need to crowd in a small flat. For example
, if people do not live with their parents when they get marry
, Suggestion
married
this
will make members can have more area to live and feel more comfortable. On the other hand
, there have
some drawback. The best example is they must pay for Suggestion
has
rent
. If people live in another home, they will pay for rent
and will grow up their expenses. This
may cause a pressure to some lower income families.
Although
there have
a significant increase trend of Suggestion
has
small family
. There Suggestion
small families
a small family
also
have some bigger families. The main advantage of the larger family is they can live with their parents. For instance
, if they live together, than
they can share the time and a laugh, subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
this
make
the relationships closer. The negative thing is there will be not much area Suggestion
makes
for
live. The evidence is if the teens get Suggestion
to
marry
and live together, Suggestion
married
this
will cause not much place for activity
. It is said that people who live in a crowded place for a long time, it will not good for our health and get angry easier.
In conclusion, no matter how big or small family units there Suggestion
the activity
also
have benefit and negative things, such
as small family will facing the rent
fee, but they can live mor comfortable
. Suggestion
more comfortably
more comfortable
In contrast
,
living in a Accept space
,
bigger
family, Suggestion
big
this
create
the close relationships with each other member, while it will be not much area Suggestion
creates
for
live.Suggestion
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