Government should spend more money on education than sports. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's era of globalization people can make their career in several aspects.
, few people are claiming that sports should get less priority as for financial support than education sector. To start up with educational ways, as individuals know that studies is vital in the present market. In present time, job opportunities are minimized and competitions are on huge level to make
a career
in any field.
, If an organization would spend more budget on education purpose, more and more children would get prosper chance to gain high practical and theoretical knowledge about latest technologies. Overall, graduated student would achieve the immense opportunity to go to foreign country for higher education and better lifestyle.
On the other hand
, Sports
as: Cricket, Football and hockey etc. These games require a superior fortune which means everyone wouldn't be getting it.
, The players would play the particular sport at a certain time period, afterward, they wouldn't have wealthy lifestyles for their children.
, If their children want to go
same field
the same field
, he or she would get easily spot in that team that's known as nepotism which leads more corruption in the country.
For Instance
- The CIA newspaper printed an article, which says In the Bollywood
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there has been 89% of new actress and actresses are coming into the industry just because of nepotism. To sum up, today's children are tomorrow's future.
, If they would have gotten an ample
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education, education
education education
that would be beneficial for the country's economy and literacy rate will go higher among to compare with other countries.
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