Some people think that in the morden world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that in today’s
society people
tend to depend on each other. While some people advocate Accept comma addition
society, people
this
view, I believe that individuals have become more independent.
On the one hand, there are those who believe that people are likely to rely on others nowadays. Linking Words
Firstly
, young people who have just Linking Words
emberked
on their career struggle go on board
embarked
to
many things in life. Because they are novices in their company, they are paid Suggestion
for
meager
salary. deficient in amount or quality or extent
meagre
As a result
, they do not enough finances to purchase big assets, which are exorbitant, Linking Words
such
as a house and a car, and they need their Linking Words
parrents’
help to solve the problem. a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
Secondly
, people have a tendency to count on co-workers at Linking Words
work
. Today, Use synonyms
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work
is highly specialised, so it requires people to attain Suggestion
the work
professional skills
and knowledge Suggestion
the professional skills
to do well their
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to do well in their
work
. Use synonyms
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, It is hard for one person to Linking Words
work
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work
.
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On the other hand
, I side with those who argue that individuals become Linking Words
increasingly
independence. In the Suggestion
increased
increasing
increase
morden
world, the proliferation of the internet allows people to access information easily, so they could search any things without help. There belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
modem
are
a wide range of online courses in diverse fields, Suggestion
is
such
as learning English, cooking, information technology. Linking Words
Therefore
, students no longer necessary to attend Linking Words
a
in-person class to get knowledge. Take my brother as an example. He is inundated with Suggestion
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work
so he Use synonyms
do not have
time participating Suggestion
does not have
a
English class without flexible time, but by learning online course he might actively get knowledge whenever and wherever he wants.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of Suggestion
an
individuals’
dependence on each other, I contend that individuals have become Suggestion
individual’s
increasily
independence. It is Suggestion
therefore
important that people should become more independent.Linking Words
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