You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

The idea of teaching parenting as a subject in schools has been around for some
time
and
also
promoted by a few,
however
, I'm of a believe that we must not burden the young ones with an extra subject that they do not need in near future. Educating kids about good parenting may have some
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
in their development, yet I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
It will do more harm
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
good. Children in school are too young to understand the nuances of parenting, and lack the required experience to fathom the skills needed to raise a child. It is a subject that involves
understading
the cognitive condition of someone who understands
understanding
the complex human
psychie
that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
psyche
psych
.
For instance
, a good
parent
may
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
lie or hide certain information from the younger ones to protect them, but it
also
controdicts
be in contradiction with
contradicts
with the basic moral values they teach. There are several skills that a
parent
may need to be good at their
job
Suggestion
jobs
. One
such
skill is to be
compationate
showing or having compassion
compassionate
. A child in their early age is very sensitive and needs a lot of attention. Being
compationate
showing or having compassion
compassionate
can earn some and
affection trust
Accept comma addition
affection, trust
from kids.
For instance
, a child is
more closer
Suggestion
closer
closest
to the
parent
who spend more
tim
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
with them. Another skill is being open minded, meaning changing with the
time
.
Although
It is very common as a
parent
to impose the rules one has practiced in their own childhood on to their kids, one needs to upgrade themselves with
time
and change according to the new generation.
For example
, In my own case, my father supported me with
merrying
take in marriage
marrying
the person I love, while arrange
merriage
the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
marriage
marriages
was a
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
model in his
time
. In conclusion, good parenting is a set of skills that require certain experience in life to understand them. Some may
argue teaching
Accept comma addition
argue, teaching
it in early age can be good, but one will only be burdened by the complex information.
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